Title: Clocking Time
Author: Mark McClure
Publisher: JFR Publishers
Publication Date: October 31, 2020
Genres: Science Fiction, Young Adult
Length: 31 pages
Source: I received a free copy from the author
Rating: 4 Stars
Two teenagers share a secret superpower: clock jumping.
Confined to his house by the authorities, remote viewer Briann enters into the life and times of a Japanese girl, Nina.
But as Briann’s feelings for Nina grow, he must overcome his fear of this unpredictable power and make one final jump before his time runs out forever.
A time travel short story about first love and tough choices.
Special powers were meant to be used, right?
Briann and Nina’s growing relationship made me smile. I’m not generally someone who gravitates towards romantic science fiction plots, but these two made a great couple. I liked the fact that they’d already decided they wanted to be together by the time I met them. That was a refreshing take on the romance angle of it all! They also understood each other in ways that most other people did not, and their unfailing support of one another made me hope they’d get their happy ending.
There were times when I found the world building a little confusing, especially when it came to Briann’s society. Everything people did there was tightly controlled, from what they ate to who they socialized with, to what forms of entertainment they used. I was intrigued by the many rules that had been created about how lower-class families like his were allowed to behave and wished the plot had gone into greater detail about that. If this portion of the storyline had been written as tightly as the rest of it, I would have felt comfortable giving it the full five star rating.
Briann and Nina’s abilities themselves were explained well. The first scene went into plenty of detail about the precise steps they took to travel to see each other. It even went so far as to describe the breathing pattern Briann adopted just before the jump happened. This isn’t something that’s always explained well in some time travel stories, so it makes me happy when authors do get specific about how it all works.
Anyone who loves time travel tales should check out Clocking Time.